You may be right, but your piece is extremely vague, watered down (TL;DR;) and… (saying it…
Eldar Musayev

1- Umm…it’s a rhetorical strategy called “pathos.” You should look it up.

2-How is simplicity creating transparency if it’s just giving you a false sense of how your government really works? I mean, if I’m reading your word salad correctly, you’re basically saying you like the “shining thing” being used to distract you from noticing the larger, more important stuff that’s going on. And, personally, I wouldn’t be so proud of that.