This is normally the result of the author lacking either (a) a clear focus, or (b) a natural order for presenting their thoughts.
Stop Taking Pictures. Start Taking Photos.
Rob Moore

Actually, it’s more likely you’re not the intended reader. On the most likely hand the author can’t satisfy everyone or the author would never get anything published.

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