5 weak words to whack from your writing
Linda Caroll

Thanks for the reinforcements. I do try to avoid those words and use more colorful options. (SOMEBODY give Trump a thesaurus!) Now, one difficulty for me, usually but not always corrected, is passive voice. You used it too. I tend, when writing essays, to use formal English. Passive voice annoys me. What are your suggestions? Thanks, John (a frustrated essayist)

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