Thank you very much for your suggestions. This piece is still very much a work in progress, and I know it needs a lot of fine-tuning, so I appreciate the feedback. I am trying to go back and reconsider the evolution of consciousness based on your insights to be able to properly amend things in light of what you indicate in your work, but this is a tricky puzzle to piece together sufficiently…particularly in the context of the story of everything the way I have chosen to present it. Thank you for the constructive criticism and keep it coming please!