Sometimes, Art is more of an Art than a Science
Ryan Howell
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I like your abstract structure, it certainly drew me in to the piece. Perhaps since you talked about Prince so much you can input some sort of reference to him in the title because it was a bit odd looking at the title and reading your article as they don’t really mix well. A good title does hook the reader but it is like a small bite of cake. It’s just enough to draw them in and it’s familiar enough to remember when reading the piece similar to when you finish that last bite of cake and you recollect to that first small bite. (that was a weird roller coaster of a metaphor but I hope you get the idea). All in all this is a really interesting topic and I look forward to reading your other pieces. *thumbs up emoji*

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