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I like what you wrote, but you lost Hill’s voice. The last one you could hear her saying it. This one… I think you just need to tweak it a bit. Some of the vocabulary, the cadences not quite right. Feels like you were so damn mad while writing… understandably so. but very very good what you wrote.

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