Well, I liked the whole story, but I suppose that I felt that the relationship between the characters was very real, which is something very important to achieve when somebody is writing. Usually, when I read something, if I feel it’s something that wouldn’t happen in the real life, it becomes bad literature. It has to make us feel as if it was real, even if it’s not. That’s why fantasy or horror works, because it is about irreal situations, but we believe they are real because of the author. You’re welcome. I think maybe you would like my stories too, although I just started.