Medium Post 6
Ree Ford
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The main point of your project seems to be embracing and understanding every part of your identity and accepting identities of all people. I was super engage in your video, especially while listening to what your family members had to say about their identities- I thought it was really interesting. Everything about your voiceover was great; you kept a nice tone and pace to the story. the soundtrack was very mellow in the background, so I was able to pay more attention to what you were actually saying, and it fit the tone very well. The only thing I would suggest is to tie it to you at the end maybe? talk about how you plan to go on in the future involving your identity or how it ties to your freshmen experience. Overall, it was a really good video, and I really enjoyed it.

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