hey, Dewi, what gives with ‘assiduous’ hanging out as the last word of the second line in the second stanza? that ain’t no simple word and if you really ‘like simple words’ then perhaps you should be more assiduous about the adjectives you choose to employ in your verse.
hey, Dewi, what gives with ‘assiduous’ hanging out as the last word of the second line in the…
john j flynn
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Hi John!
Thanks for being here. This is just a friendly reminder to please consider tone when posting — it’s difficult to communicate tone in text form vs. in person, and I could see how someone might interpret ‘what gives’ as a bit brisk. Let me know if you have questions about our feedback guidelines. Thanks!

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