oh my god if i knew this was allowed…
Dewi
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Thanks for your feedback!

That tongue thing was probably more confusing due to the fact that I totally misplaced that apostrophe ha. I meant boys’ as in belonging to all the boys, but I may change the wording too as you suggested to make it more clear!

Do you think the bullet idea is working? It feels like a bit of a shift at the end of the poem to me but I can’t figure out if that’s a bad thing.

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