I could have done without the soliloquy on lameness. Part of the fun of the Olympics is sitting down and learning the merits of some sport that you would never watch otherwise, and have a basic rooting interest based on nationalism. And, because it’s sports, it’s not a big deal.
Other than that, pretty accurate as far as watchability. I might have enjoyed an article that got into underwatched sports that are surprisingly watchable. Table tennis comes to mind.