Hi Samantha!

I liked your use of a visual mind map a lot! It was a great way to generate ideas as well as being fun to look into the little detailed images, like how ‘moist’ was a water droplet. Those little visuals really helped in keeping me interested in looking at it a little closer. Something about the cookie that I really liked was that the cookies inside looks like it could have easily spilled out. So you did a really good job with experimenting and understanding the properties of the cookie ingredients.

I wish that there was a bigger difference between the two test cookies. I feel like they were a little similar so maybe you weren’t able to push too many different flavors within the tests. Other than that, there was a lot that was done for the overall development of the cookie. Although the two tests seem connected to me, they still helped in making the final product better because you learned about certain things in the first test.

What if you made cookies with different fillings. The cookies are very delicious so maybe you can use your good tastes in making new filling varieties. For example, something like chocolate or apple pie filling, or anything that might seem good to you.

The cookie was very tasty. You have a lot of potential with this cookie though! Great job, Samantha!