Run on sentences – they ruined The Sun Also Rises for me.
Ugh, so many!
Pete Ross

I suppose you don’t realize that Hemingway deliberately wrote poorly at times:

But yeah, run on sentences can be really frustrating to read, and they just go on and on, I can’t stand it because when I eat someone else’s ideas I can only chew in bites, I cannot eat two hundred words in one mouthful, I need a punctuation mark to conclude so I can chew, swallow, and take my first bite, holy fuck I need a period or an exclamation mark, or even a question mark would do, oh no, not another comma, I cannot breathe!

Hyperventilating! Deep breath!


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