HUZZAH for putting it out there!!! I haven’t event put excerpts out and I have over 100pgs that could easily benefit from feedback. Haha ‘easily’. ‘Be rendered actually readable’. Whatever. My point is, you’ve now done this three separate times on here. You are made of courage.
Also, I think bits/blurbs is a totally legit way of starting. (Wtf do I know, tho.) I think your story is going to come on whatever way you can get it to, and if that means bits and blurbs, then I’m all in for reading every last one of them. GET IT. ❤️