Hey Michael,

I love how your cookie ended up tasting in class, it almost ended up tasting like a bowl of fruity pebbles. I like how in the beginning of your Medium post you explained why you thought your cookie was novel, that was great & something I missed in my post, I wish I would’ve done that. I like the way you listed out your recipe too, it made it much easier to view rather than having it all bunched together separated by commas. I wish you would’ve changed the base cookie recipes for each cookie at the beginning, but I understand why you did, because it made it possible to try a bunch of different cookie options. I wish I would’ve tried small changes in my final recipe like you did, just to see which one came out with the best form, best taste, and other small things that I didn't get an opportunity to try. What if next time you write a blog post on Medium you try to elaborate on your second idea trial, not just simply stating that the process for this cookie did’t work. How did the process not work? What did you learn? What if next time you brainstorm for ideas you list them out, then focus on your top favorite ideas, instead of running a trial by creating single cookies or ideas. This may help you achieve quicker success next time around.