I like that you made a color coded mind map. The colors make reading the map much easier. It also makes it a lot easier to distinguish the categories. When just one color is used, it can all just become a mess but your coloring makes it more clear.
I wish all of your hand written mind map was pictured. Because your mind map is so great, I wish I could see all of it. I understand that it’s hard to take a picture of your page, but I would have liked to see it cropped differently.
What if you made your hand written mind map with a gutter? Planning a gutter around the page would help a lot when it came down to cropping. It would make it so that the entire picture could be seen.