Mark Kolke
Nov 2 · 1 min read

Umair — this is a great article — but you could do some things to make it pop and be more readable, because in it’s current format is dry tedious reading. Try some headings, sub-heading- paragraph breaks .. make some things bold; see the article not as ‘the writer’ but as your editor helping to get it read by more people!

Just one guy’s two-cents.

Be well …

Mark Kolke

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