I love this topic. As a computer science/information technology double major I totally relate to this topic. I took my first cybersecurity class this semester and honestly I thought it was super boring! I thought your essay, however; was super interesting. It was an easy read and captivates the reader. I think the use of bolded text, various graphics and italics could emphasise your view a bit more. Overall, it’s well written and a great topic — I think it could just use a bit more development.