The title, while straightforward, is understandable and lets the reader know what is to be discussed in the article. However, it doesn't exactly regard the main topic at hand, that being whether married couples should hire attractive house keepers. The title makes one think that they're only reading about marital attractions and nothing else. I think a subtitle would be effective to help clear that up.

The article itself is well written and it properly reflects your personal opinions. Next time, however, try using hyperlinks, images, and/or research to strengthen your points.