Lean Prose
Aug 29, 2017 · 1 min read

People are taught to love themselves regardless of their performance. Thus, they justify mediocrity. Yet, Asian’s and other immigrant groups who often are considered to have low self-esteem consistently outperform American’s who have high self-esteem.

Apostrophes in Asians and Americans? No possessives. Plethora of gaffes here. Invest in good editor. Unless you want mediocre.

Some nice references provided otherwise.

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    Not what you say - but how it's said. 98% of your writing is fat. Cut it. Words matter. Choose wisely.