Anita armant

Mrs. Cizek

10/04/14

· Original thesis: My Dad and my Baby brother Owen make me happy.

· New Audience: Dad

· New Format: poem

“ Holy Shift Project”

My Dad and my Baby brother Owen make me happy. Though tough days, I

know they will be here. Some people may not realize the love we share. But

the thoughts of them gone can never appear. My brother Owen just cracks

me up, the moment he smile, is the moment I find luck. My brother is

amazing, threw thick and thin. Between heartaches and headaches he’s

always on my end. My father on the other hand, is why I’m here on earth,

but to show some respect my mother had me at birth. My dad makes me

happy because he stands in my corner, he understands me and pushes me

though my struggles when the nights get longer. They bring my happiness ,

they lighten my soul , they bring joy to my nature and pride to my soul.

Even though my days fill pretty crappy , My daddy and my baby brother

Owen makes me very happy.