On Structuring an Argument
Another good response to Mark’s op-ed: http://blogs.timesofindia.indiatimes.com/toi-edit-page/its-a-battle-for-internet-freedom/
One thing I prefer about that op-ed is that he uses examples. I agree with your points, but the way you structured your argument suffers from the same failing as Zuckerberg’s piece: no evidence. Immediately after reading your piece, I wasn’t aware of the situation and its details, and I actually disagreed with you. It was only after researching more on my own that I came to the same conclusion; perhaps you could bring more information in to help other readers do the same?