Hi! I think you did very good finding a text which shows privilege. And in this case it is a very blatant example of white privilege. Some things that would have been good to have are definitions of what that means (as someone in a course on Multiculturalism, I understood it), and perhaps consider spelling and grammar editing. I have to do it on my works too, so I hope you don’t find me pretentious for adding that in here. :) I have heard of this documentary, and I won’t lie, I had similar reactions as some of the comments to start with. Something you might consider is adding in some of the reassurances offered by Peggy McIntosh’s article or in the Bike Analogy news article. Happy Blogging!