This line stabbed me right through the heart — and the rest are little daggers hanging off of me all over. This is so powerful and so well done. Wow. I’m just floored by the power of this. You have an incredible gift for making something we all know and understand come alive on the page. Amazing. I’m so glad to have been pointed to this. I must thank BHD. Truly looking forward to reading more of your work. Stunning.