Wow!

I really like your poem!It is about being yourself and not let your fears control your life. The consistent number of syllables makes it easier to read and gives the poem structure. The mood, which you create through all the imagery and rhetorical devices, is motivating the reader to believe in himself and gives hope. The imagery you use gives your poem power, because it makes your statements stronger and the reader has room for his own interpretations. The diction you use emphasizes your rhythm and the words represent the mood of the poem. I really like the personifications you use, because they represent exactly what you want to show with your poem and are really powerful.