Writing …

I want to run into your gaze until my breath fades away from you.
I want to float in your mind as my body disintegrates around you.
I want to inhale your gestures while my blood dances in you. 
I want to ride your sleepless hours like my hands kiting goodbyes to you. 
I want to violate your every word up to your skin blooms off of me.
I want to sink in your light whilst your feet are reaching out to me.
I want to love your fears in your smell’s quietest spaces of me.
I want you

a) How the text came as an inspiration:

I want to run into your gaze until my breath fades away.
I want to float in your mind as my body disintegrates.
I want to violate every word that blooms out of your skin.
I want to inhale your gestures while my blood dances in you. 
I want to ride your sleepless hours like hands kiting goodbyes. 
I want to sink in your light as your steps reach out to me.
I want to love your fears in the quietest spaces of your smell.
I want you.

b) From the inspirational text, I tried to structure it as:

  1. About “love”, with a repetitive structure
  2. First part of each phrase defining a physical “wanting”
  3. Second part, describing an intangible element related to the other
  4. Third, some conjunction word/concept that could create some parallelism
  5. Fourth, a body element related to the lovers
  6. Fifth, some movement in space.

c) Based on the designed structure, the text was reviewed as:

I want to run / into your gaze / until / my breath / fades away from you.
I want to float / in your mind / as / my body / disintegrates around you.
I want to inhale / your gestures / while / my blood / dances in you. 
I want to ride / your sleepless hours / like / my hands / kiting goodbyes to you. 
I want to violate / your every word / up to / your skin / blooms off of me.
I want to sink / in your light / whilst / your feet / are reaching out to me.
I want to love / your fears / in / your smell’s / quietest spaces of me.
I want you