Reflections on Meeting with Senator Bernie Sanders and Secretary Hillary Clinton, and the…
DeRay Mckesson
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Thank you for this and the work that pushed these conversations forward. I’d like to share it further.

As a minor and complete aside, I might suggest a slight edit to use more equivalent formalities when referencing the two candidates. Specifically, Bernie Sanders is informally referenced (as “Sanders”) only once out of 13 total references by name in the respective meeting summary. Whereas, Hillary Rodham Clinton is informally referenced (as “HRC” or “Clinton”) 14 times out of 18 total references by name in the respective meeting summary. It is irrelevant to the topics at hand, but it is something that can derail the conversation, especially amongst white women.