What Stopped VR from Becoming the Next Big Thing
Nadezhda Yankulska
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The story is well-reported; it covers all of the questions a person might have about VR.

I like the photos and the info graphics in the story — they support the information in the text. All of them, as well as the sources in the text are credited.

The fact that you start with “Back to the Future” is something that can grab anyone’s attention, so that’s a good lead.

I’m not too crazy about the title — it’s kind of long and too specific, while in the actual story you focus on more things.

The length of the story is too long, in my opinion. You could put some of the information in more simple sentences and you need to decide what’s really important and cut the rest.

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