I Do Not Love the Process

This week, I received feedback on one of my first posts for this class. Honestly, I had forgotten about the martian activity until I was told I’d be editing it. I’ve never liked to edit or go over my work. I never even check my answers on tests. I am impatient and easily bored. However, this week wasn’t so bad.

Hearing what worked and what didn’t allowed me to see my work from another perspective. I had forgotten about the fact that not everyone was present for my interview with Connor and that they didn’t know all the details I did.

For example, I cut some unimportant details and added more where needed, like where he lives (running in Milwaukee) and what “furry friend” he has. There weren’t a lot of changes suggested but hearing them definitely was eye-opening.

https://medium.com/@michaela.walters/connor-the-human-65ffcd6d270f#.9ka6oi5ok