Michael Evarts
Aug 24, 2017 · 1 min read

Abby O. Akoto. Congratulations on your being the first choice in this poetry “contest.” I use contest sparingly because everyone has a different experience and will write about theirs, differently, but as passionate for them.

You have brought this “First Kiss” to a place of reality for us readers. We read your words as you describe your experience and we can see so clearly your physical response to this Kiss. Excellent imagery and well described to us. Very intense. Very real. And very visual.

Beautiful poem. Wonderful write.

Well done you!

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    Michael Evarts

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