Michael Stalcup
Aug 27, 2017 · 1 min read

Nice one, Ram! This is my favorite of the pantoums you’ve posted so far (and not just because you’re riffing off my pantoum, although that does make it extra enjoyable for me). I like the overall theme, the way you incorporated the borrowed lines, and the way your final stanza repeats your opening first/third lines so naturally. Good stuff!

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