Tamyka showed this to me a while back. I sent it to my Kindle, read it in bed one night, highlighted it up, loved it, and made a note to myself to come back here and actually highlight/comment on Medium too to let you know I think is a really, really cool form — as good or better than lots of the historic poetic forms, in my opinion. You have clearly put a lot of thought into it. I look forward to trying it out someday.
One thought, though: Who says I have to write the journey after I write the beginning and end? You can’t stop me, and you’ll never know. (Bahahahaha.)