Micheal Kinney
Jun 21, 2018 · 1 min read

You really need to fix some of your typos and do a once over.

“not only [to] the key people”
“but also [the ability] to understand” (remove “ing”)
“c[a]r sharing services”
“all of the[m] have been Lexus models”
“also change[d] manufacturers”
And fix the last sentence.. Just as the “failed” ROKR did for the iPhone.

Otherwise, great article.

Thanks for the read.

    Micheal Kinney

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