News Diary 10 & 11 : Nov. 13 ( Two Diary )
The sense of big data, and the big news about Chinese policy, tell us what happened. Then separate different piece of news into different parts, it is a great way to tell the story, especial when the writer couldn’t transit naturally.
News Diary 11
The beginning told me the problem directly. And use a quote to ask question. It makes me fell I have a strong communication with it. And at the end, show me some background about this news, it is a del operator way to write news.