News Diary 10 & 11 : Nov. 13 ( Two Diary )

http://m.thepaper.cn/newsDetail_forward_1396134

The sense of big data, and the big news about Chinese policy, tell us what happened. Then separate different piece of news into different parts, it is a great way to tell the story, especial when the writer couldn’t transit naturally.

News Diary 11

http://usa.chinadaily.com.cn/epaper/2015-11/13/content_22448082.htm

The beginning told me the problem directly. And use a quote to ask question. It makes me fell I have a strong communication with it. And at the end, show me some background about this news, it is a del operator way to write news.

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