I really enjoyed reading your blog post “How have changes in technology impacted on the way humans communicate”. I believe that you had a very strong and valid argument in towards answering the given question. I liked the way you gave a personal contribution in the paragraph about being a future educator. A couple of things I will suggest in order to improve your blog would be to minimise the amount of writing you have on your blog as some readers may not to read something that long, include visual images, and try to make the title of the blog more interesting rather than just the question. Overall, your information is very valid and reliable, the only thing that could be improved is the layout of your blog to make it more interesting and eye catching. Good work!