You do a great job of setting up your arguement that SNL can influence the people who watch it. The political aspects of the SNL is writen very well. But Ithink you could do a better of introducing the two aspects you focus on at the beginning of the essay. Also you connect the two aspects well but Ithink you can stress more how the two aspects complimant each other. altogether it was a really good essay. I also think you did a good job of making your oppinion clear and it was very interesting to read.