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I thought that it was a good poem. To me it was about the “speakers” perspective. As a man it connected with me as well. I thought that it spoke to male aspirations and inner desire.

I think that your approach of letting the commenters comment sounds about right to me. There will always be people who don’t like what you write or perhaps not everything you write. Not all of your poems connect with me. I’m grateful for the ones that do.

Those who don’t like what you write don’t have to read you. For the rest of us, write on!

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