You appear to suggest that you feel there is a great issue within current society that should be addressed (which I would tend to agree with). But you also appear to suggest that because this author chose to share a rather personal experience uniquely her own as opposed to what YOU think this piece should/could have been about, it somehow renders this piece of writing useless and that she’d have been far better off writing a poem because YOU would have enjoyed that more.

Sort of ironic that while making a point about how we no longer know how to connect with one another, you exhibit that exact fault by choosing to put down the authors work in pursuit of aggrandize your own personal agenda rather than connecting with the experience if possible, and at the very least give credit where credit is due for a wonderfully written piece about a magical human experience.

Well I enjoyed this piece immensely myself, and I think that your comment should have had a period in place of where the first comma is and gone no further.