You are missing the slam-dunk analogy.
Mike O’Dell

Thank you for your honest critique Mike. In an effort to honor Neil Gaiman’s words, this is what I’m taking away:

  1. Am I missing a slam-dunk analogy? Most likely.
  2. Is that slam-dunk analogy about how we look? Maybe.

Priority inversion. That one I’ll think about for a while.

“Remember: when people tell you something’s wrong or doesn’t work for them, they are almost always right. When they tell you exactly what they think is wrong and how to fix it, they are almost always wrong.” ― Neil Gaiman

Thank you for starting a conversation here!

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