Self-Publish The Bestseller Inside Of You: A How-To
James Altucher
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James Altucher, I am very interested in the things you are writing about. However, I find it difficult to get past the first three sentences because you use excessive paragraph breaks.

Just a tip: If two sentences are part of one thought, don’t separate them into their own paragraphs. Separating most sentences makes your readers work harder to follow your narrative.

This suggestion is just my opinion. You probably learned your formatting from someone much more knowledgeable than me about writing. But I know I would appreciate feedback from my followers.

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