Great job with the cookies! I like how you featured some fantastic pictures in your blog post that really capture the whole process that you went through to make your cookies. I also like how you featured the comments of the people who sampled your cookies along the way. I wish you could have gone a little bit more in depth when describing the taste of the cookies so the reader could get a mental bite of what your cookies tasted like. Additionally, I wish your notebook pictures were a bit easier to read. What if you added half of the oatmeal and half of the wild rice? Do you think that would have gotten rid of your flour problem? What if you injected the cream cheese frosting into your final cookie?