I'll be honest: when I read the first part of your story, I was like "damn, that old, deja-vu SHOW, DON'T TELL" thing we've all heard a million time.

But then came the second part about the importance of being specific. That other writing advice may have been heard a million times too, but it's one that easy not so easy to grasp but it's always nis to be reminded about it. You made it crystal clear and well illustrated.

And since you mentioned Wonder Woman, one of my childhood's heroine, I had to comment and share claps on top of it.

Smiling face.