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Thank you, Jules. I prefer my other world stories too.

I’ll keep that in mind about the dialogue. Hmm. I’ve always been faulted for writing too much dialogue. That’s why this one had so little in it. Trying to do it with narration.

I’ll dialogue the shit out of the next one and see what happens.

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