Thanks for trying it, even if it did make you feel let down. It isn’t my genre. I am glad I tried it, but I haven’t got the right imagination for it, I think.
Thanks for your thoughtful read of it. It’s interesting because it seems to have done all the things for you that I intended it to do, so in a sense it was effective. If your words are true to your feelings then it did to you what I hoped it’d do, mostly. I think I haven’t any interest in trying to cause that effect anymore. Not for me.