但是，认为追求金钱是商人唯一的目的是不公正的判断。(it is unfair to do sth, assert, the pursuit of)
However, it is unfair to assert that the pursuit of money is the only purpose of business people.
的确，尽管许多事件与我们的日常生活并没有直接联系，但仍然应该鼓励现代公民密切关注时事。(be associated with, keep a close watch on)
Indeed, although many of these events are not directly associated with our daily lives, modern citizens ought to be encouraged to keep a close watch on them.
因此，我更愿意认为大学教育是通向成功的基石，而不是最重要的因素。(I would rather prefer to regard A as B, a stepping stone, A rather than B)
Therefore, I would rather prefer to regard university education as a stepping stone toward success rather than the most important factor.
因此，将一部分资金投入到改善人力资源之中是公司领导者的明智选择。(it is a wise choice for sb to do sth, allocate)
Therefore, it is a wise choice for company leaders to allocate a portion of capitals on human resource improvement.
所有在校教师定期进修相关课程、更新知识储备是势在必行的。(it is imperative for SB to do Sth, renew, periodically)
It is imperative for all school teachers to renew their own knowledge by taking courses periodically.