Point: The ups and downs Rachel has experienced as a performer thus far in her life.
Dramatic Question: The video definitely does a good job capturing the viewers attention and keeping it.
Emotion: I was emotionally engaged when the video of Rachel was playing of her before the play dancing around. It really showed how much she enjoyed doing what she does.
Voice: Very good voice! Loved how you had the video of you in there after getting home from a comp.
Soundtrack: Great music and videos included!
Economy: maybe incorporate pictures of all of your costumes, teams, etc. (Not necessary but would add more time)
Pacing: Pace was great!
Overall great story I really enjoyed it! Cannot wait to see the final project!!