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Point: The ups and downs Rachel has experienced as a performer thus far in her life.

Dramatic Question: The video definitely does a good job capturing the viewers attention and keeping it.

Emotion: I was emotionally engaged when the video of Rachel was playing of her before the play dancing around. It really showed how much she enjoyed doing what she does.

Voice: Very good voice! Loved how you had the video of you in there after getting home from a comp.

Soundtrack: Great music and videos included!

Economy: maybe incorporate pictures of all of your costumes, teams, etc. (Not necessary but would add more time)

Pacing: Pace was great!

Overall great story I really enjoyed it! Cannot wait to see the final project!!

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