The Experiment
Derrick Cameron

Where’s the twist?!?!

I like the idea behind the story, it reminds me of Stranger Things on Netflix, but with a positive ending.

Although I liked reading the story, it didn’t have that feeling of completeness like your other stories. I’d love to see you take this story and write it in a longer form to explore the contrast between the torture and bliss you can experience in the mind.

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