I definitely see the sensible side of things and that having money in the bank allows for a lot of…
Kimberly Lew

This is an awesome response — I think the context of your career changes everything. As it stands, the article comes across like you just moved to NYC for life experience, which is sort of a naive, Taylor Swiftian cliche and does a disservice to your thoughtful, intelligent writing.

I would love to hear about like, getting rejected from a publishing internship while you were in GA, or attending a publishing event where you met someone who knew someone who got you your first job. That is my selfish reader’s desire, but you’re free to ignore it ;)