I really like the subjects you pick, the way you unfold the story, your sensibility. But I really get tangled up in the language and find it hard to read. I have to re-read phrases because I lose the meaning on the way. Then again, English is not my first language, so maybe it’s not an issue for others. I only give this comment because I like what you write and feel it could get even better. I am definitely not short of flaws myself, in writing. Best of luck.