I think your article is nice, but a bit displaced. First, audience. Are you trying to speak to non-millennials, and convince them that millennials are not narcissistic? While studies can lean one way or another, the NY Times recently published a study that shows an increase of narcissim since the 1970's. Aside from that I think your opnion is a bit tanted. You speak from your position as an upper middle class individual. I don’t think the majority of millennials are using social media the way you do. That being said, I think a better approach to the article would to address millennials and teach them the power of using social media in the way you do.